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Death of Love by ~Talking-Pinata:iconTalking-Pinata:

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Afterthought: My sister's fish just died. She said she cried as she watched him struggle for the stray ends of life. Then my father put him in some rubbing alcohol to put him out of his misery. She says even though she knows it was the right thing to do, she still cried more then. Sometimes the right thing is much more painful.

***I'm not suicidal. This piece is entirely abstract and is implying the last time I fell into depression.

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*Phoenixknight1221 Jan 22, 2009, 10:23:39 PM
very powerful, and wonderful imagery. I just wish I could find a heart to feel a pulse.
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*BellaEzrebetFang Jan 23, 2009, 5:58:36 AM
"I snip the yarn in two with my teeth and kneel next to my heart, wrapping the string around and around my heart. Its pulse speeds. Mine doesn’t—I have no pulse left. But my heart’s quickens like it knows what is about to come. Good, I hope it does."

This was a very intense piece.

;) I WAS wondering about the whole suicide thing. I was like :ohnoes:!

I'm sorry her fish died. :( I remember crying a lot after my guinea pig died.

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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
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~Talking-Pinata Jan 23, 2009, 1:34:40 PM
:hug:

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"Give a man a fish, and he'll make art. Teach a man a fish, and one day he'll have a pool full of exploding koi" -Neil Gaiman

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~Talking-Pinata Jan 23, 2009, 1:35:18 PM
Mine beats too loudly, sadly.

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"Give a man a fish, and he'll make art. Teach a man a fish, and one day he'll have a pool full of exploding koi" -Neil Gaiman

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*Midnight53 Jan 23, 2009, 9:16:38 PM
oh wow. so much emotion... such a great abstract. it really powerful.

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"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." -Isaac Asimov
"It is a very hard undertaking to seek to please everybody." -Publilius Syrus
"What you are is a question only you can answer." -Lois McMaster Bujold
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~Talking-Pinata Jan 23, 2009, 9:17:23 PM
I feel like dying.

thanks. :)

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"Give a man a fish, and he'll make art. Teach a man a fish, and one day he'll have a pool full of exploding koi" -Neil Gaiman

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*Midnight53 Jan 24, 2009, 5:56:40 PM
Don't die. :(

*hug*

I love you.

--
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." -Isaac Asimov
"It is a very hard undertaking to seek to please everybody." -Publilius Syrus
"What you are is a question only you can answer." -Lois McMaster Bujold
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~Talking-Pinata Jan 25, 2009, 1:59:06 PM
:hug:

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"Give a man a fish, and he'll make art. Teach a man a fish, and one day he'll have a pool full of exploding koi" -Neil Gaiman

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~WeAreZeitgeist Jan 26, 2009, 3:52:34 PM
That was intense.
Captivating from start to finish.

That is literature.

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I think its a lot easier to love than to hate.
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